Why Juvenile Commit to Suicide?
Why students commit to suicide? I started to think this when I heard about the suicide affairs among young people. I am worring about him/her and their families,friends. Their families’ expectations demolish, suddenly and also themself. May be alot of factors that they do it, and they have one effective reason,too.
One of the reasons, these persons feel alone in their environment. Their friends don’t help them and their family don’t their problems. Their fathers come from their job, tiredly and soon they lie on the sofa. Their mothers don’t go out kitchen. These times person come in home. Everybody who is in home, doesn’t ignore them. To some students, their parents can listen to their problems but they can evaluate to age’s conditions. Actually, these person are usually unhappy both their school and their environment. They find the solutionin the death.(commit to suicide). Parents had better in their children this makes them feel better.
Another reason is failure.( actually these two reasons are related to with each other. If children(especially teenagers) are failure in their school, they are afraid of their families’ pressure. They can’t tell their problems related to school or lessons to their parents and their teachers. If they say their dificulties to their instructers, they give an information about their situation to families. Soon problems or dificulties increase day by day and teenager fed up with these and want to die.
Families should follow to their daughters and sons in every situations.
Both of two reasons are affective for commit to suicide. Nowadays, there are a lot of suicide affairs. Both family and person(children or teenager) should be careful about life problems. Anything isn’t important as your life!
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Esme,I think your essay's topic is good,but there are some grammar mistakes such as themself .Your thesis statement is a bit weak because there are two reason ,but you say one effective reason.
YanıtlaSilhi honey :) you have written introduction paragraph in good way then you have supported your thesis statement well.without thiking some gramar mistakes your essay is good ;)
YanıtlaSilhi dear your essay is nice but there isnt enough example about it and there are same gramar mistakes :)
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