9 Mayıs 2010 Pazar

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A Different World
You are astounded when you see so many cows. It isn’t diffucult to understand here is a cow farm. I tought much more beautifulwhile I was walking around the shed. Here it was very enjoyable for me, that day.
I always remember that day whenever Isee a cow. I saw so many cows at every age in there. Some cows were small and mischievous. At the same time some cows were big and also peaceful. All of them were independent from each other except for cows which had a family. Some cows were lying under the big trees and they ruminated as if they had gum in their mouths. There were a lot of sweet calves and they were running after their mothers. In addition, grenness was very suitable for these animals both eating and sleeping. Cows were nourished very well by farmers even if sometimes this work is very tiring for them. Farm affairs were being this in throughthout day and soon all of cows entered the big shed in rows in the evenings.
This farm was very beautiful. I was both very enjoyed and very pleased to see this farm and also I learned some things about cows.

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  1. hi esmehan
    i read your essay and i want to say that i like your essay. your descriptions are good and your essay constructure is good.

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