DIFFERENT AND SIMILAR ASPECTS OF BETWEEN ANGELA’S ASHES AND MIRACLE WORKER
A lot of people run across some diffuculties in their life, but some of them are born with their miseries. Angela’s Ashes and Miracle Worker mention about hero and heroine’s hardness. Actually Miracle Worker’s heroine(Helen)has a rich family that easily supply her wishes. However, Angela’s Ashes’ hero(Frankie) has a poor family and also his father is drunkard. In addition, both of these films’ themes are to struggle to achieve when films’ main characters face with some difficulties. Helen struggles with her deafness and blindness while Frankie is trying to overcome his obstacles. Every two film includes some pathetic scenes which are affected to viewers. The most effective scene is Frankie’s brothers dying to their poverty, inasmuch as they are very sweet and innocent. Because of the fact that we need to take some advices, one of them is patience.
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YanıtlaSilYour paragraph is good.Your words are clear but i think, you should improve your conclusion.And also can you explain drunkard's mean.
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hi my dear =) i agree with betül.your wiring is well_written.sentences are clear and effective.however,you can improve your conclısion because your topic sentence and controling ideas are good so conclusion must be good,too =)also,thanks for your comment =)
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YanıtlaSili read your paragraph it is really good.. but aybe you can show your creativity in your essays as if you do in classes :)))) good work...welll done :)))
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ugur, no 'aybe'. it is 'maybe' :)
YanıtlaSilesme, your paragraph is good. your writing style is very fluent. Actually, like Betul's advice; you should improve conclusion part. Take care friend =)
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