Three Main Parts


introduction
I generally mentioned some treatment methods in my introduction paragraph. I gave some clues about body at large.

body
I tried to write some specific information about treatment methods which are used.


conclusion
I summarized to topic which is mentioned.

WHICH ONE IS MORE HEALTIER?
Generally, we don’t think our healthy until sickness finds to us. We don’t know what we will do when we fall sick, and we appeal to some diverse treatment methods. Some of people can select conventional ways while the others are choosing to go doctor. Of course there is also very different and picturesque treatment methods in this situation, but the significant thing that to decide which one is healthier?
First of all, I would like to mention about these treatment. In ancient times, people used to use very different ways in order to heal their sickness. For example, they justly prayed to God and cured accidently their illness. This method has still being used by some people who don’t use their noodle. Of course, we should pray to something to God, but science and religion are completed to each other. We can hear that a lot of people go to the Quacker due to their various illnesses. Some of them can get better, and this is normal. However, some of them cannot get better and this certainly isn’t normal. Secondly, some people defend to recover thanks to thinking positive way but, this may be a solution for some illness, such as cancer. As far as I know, there are a lot of people who struggle with cancer and soon overcome. If so, we have to full of beans when we run across these illnesses because we can get better. As third one, what will doctors do? Anybody can’t go to them, when they are taken ill. Where are the people? doctors said. People are merely thinking and also they are praying for their sickness. Treatment ways can change for person to person and also community to community.
Finally, I can say that we have a lot of treatment methods. I suggest we should go to doctor and at the same time we should pray if we believe to God because God gives to everything such as happiness or sorrowful. In addition, we should never give up even if we have a cow because thinking positively is important for some illnesses, by the way we should go to doctor so as to recover, swiftly.



Beliefs
Praying
Religious things
Quacker
Doctor
Think positive
Treatment Methods