BIG NUISANCE: POLUTION
When I was a child in my hometown, Manisa I was looking at the stars on the sky. I had been waiting to flight of a shooting star and then I made some wishes. Also in day time I was looking at the biggest and pure white clouds. But nowadays, I can’t see neither stars nor clouds on the sky. All right, what is the reason or reasons?
One of the first causes of the polution in my hometown was density(number of people per care)of a city. This means, in concur with increasing the expanding cities, number of houses, number of cars, number of workshops went up in contrast people deforested to jungels around the city. Hence ratio of carbon dioxide increased in the city athmosphere. No more we have dark clouds regardless of pure clouds.
Secondly, cause of the pollution was oppening a lot of factories around the city. As depens on it, these factories were very carelees about environment. So they couldn’t use the filter for their factory chimney. That’s why all disgusting, harmful gases were unthoughtfully set free the environment by those factories. We always have fume and smell as if there was haze in city athmosphere.
Consequently, instead of renewable resources, wasting resources have been increasing day by day. Therefore, we will forget green, open and clean spaces, even if we don’t want to forget them. But our nature generation won’t never see to shining stars and smiling clouds, unfortunately.
17 Aralık 2010 Cuma
10 Aralık 2010 Cuma
ı want a husband
I Want a Husband
Some part of community classifies to men and women as to their gender. I stand to that one of part. I am a wife in that classification. Even, some of women may not be pleasure to be their sex because of baundries in the society, in contrast some of women bostingly tell to be women. Every two of them want to somethings from their husband. All right, how do I want to husband?
First of all, at all costs he has to love me. Even if he sees the most beautiful girl in the world,he doesn’t turn his eyes to her. I want a husband who supports to me in every issue. He must give me encouragement both economically and physcially. That’s why, money has ever decreased in my pocket and he makes one’s day in every time. Secondly , I want a husband to clean to all home without not telling any bad words. By the way, I want a husband to perapare every meals on time. Thirdly, I want a husband to ironning, washing, before I say to those. I want a husband who takes care of children when they are sick and a husband is carefully interested in their clothes of washing, drying, ironning and of course their school works. At the same time, he has to be a job which is very high income. Needless to say, my husband is aware of everything which is related to home , children….
Any old thing, he has to trust on me. I want a husband to not ask to to questions of ’’ ..with whom, …for what,…why,…where,…’’ I want a husband to go necessary grocery and market shoppin. I want a husband who will gladly care for me when I am sick. I want a husband who will show honour to our guests. I want a husband to allow to my every vacation. I want a husband who read every newsweek and tell them to me.
I want a husband who is very self-sacricifing insomuch he will carry baby. I want a husband to make surprise our some special moments.
Isn’t there any that husband in the world??
Some part of community classifies to men and women as to their gender. I stand to that one of part. I am a wife in that classification. Even, some of women may not be pleasure to be their sex because of baundries in the society, in contrast some of women bostingly tell to be women. Every two of them want to somethings from their husband. All right, how do I want to husband?
First of all, at all costs he has to love me. Even if he sees the most beautiful girl in the world,he doesn’t turn his eyes to her. I want a husband who supports to me in every issue. He must give me encouragement both economically and physcially. That’s why, money has ever decreased in my pocket and he makes one’s day in every time. Secondly , I want a husband to clean to all home without not telling any bad words. By the way, I want a husband to perapare every meals on time. Thirdly, I want a husband to ironning, washing, before I say to those. I want a husband who takes care of children when they are sick and a husband is carefully interested in their clothes of washing, drying, ironning and of course their school works. At the same time, he has to be a job which is very high income. Needless to say, my husband is aware of everything which is related to home , children….
Any old thing, he has to trust on me. I want a husband to not ask to to questions of ’’ ..with whom, …for what,…why,…where,…’’ I want a husband to go necessary grocery and market shoppin. I want a husband who will gladly care for me when I am sick. I want a husband who will show honour to our guests. I want a husband to allow to my every vacation. I want a husband who read every newsweek and tell them to me.
I want a husband who is very self-sacricifing insomuch he will carry baby. I want a husband to make surprise our some special moments.
Isn’t there any that husband in the world??
30 Ekim 2010 Cumartesi
Three Main Parts
introduction
I generally mentioned some treatment methods in my introduction paragraph. I gave some clues about body at large.
body
I tried to write some specific information about treatment methods which are used.
conclusion
I summarized to topic which is mentioned.
WHICH ONE IS MORE HEALTIER?
Generally, we don’t think our healthy until sickness finds to us. We don’t know what we will do when we fall sick, and we appeal to some diverse treatment methods. Some of people can select conventional ways while the others are choosing to go doctor. Of course there is also very different and picturesque treatment methods in this situation, but the significant thing that to decide which one is healthier?
First of all, I would like to mention about these treatment. In ancient times, people used to use very different ways in order to heal their sickness. For example, they justly prayed to God and cured accidently their illness. This method has still being used by some people who don’t use their noodle. Of course, we should pray to something to God, but science and religion are completed to each other. We can hear that a lot of people go to the Quacker due to their various illnesses. Some of them can get better, and this is normal. However, some of them cannot get better and this certainly isn’t normal. Secondly, some people defend to recover thanks to thinking positive way but, this may be a solution for some illness, such as cancer. As far as I know, there are a lot of people who struggle with cancer and soon overcome. If so, we have to full of beans when we run across these illnesses because we can get better. As third one, what will doctors do? Anybody can’t go to them, when they are taken ill. Where are the people? doctors said. People are merely thinking and also they are praying for their sickness. Treatment ways can change for person to person and also community to community.
Finally, I can say that we have a lot of treatment methods. I suggest we should go to doctor and at the same time we should pray if we believe to God because God gives to everything such as happiness or sorrowful. In addition, we should never give up even if we have a cow because thinking positively is important for some illnesses, by the way we should go to doctor so as to recover, swiftly.
Beliefs
Praying
Religious things
Quacker
Doctor
Think positive
Treatment Methods
22 Ekim 2010 Cuma
DIFFERENT AND SIMILAR ASPECTS OF BETWEEN ANGELA’S ASHES AND MIRACLE WORKER
A lot of people run across some diffuculties in their life, but some of them are born with their miseries. Angela’s Ashes and Miracle Worker mention about hero and heroine’s hardness. Actually Miracle Worker’s heroine(Helen)has a rich family that easily supply her wishes. However, Angela’s Ashes’ hero(Frankie) has a poor family and also his father is drunkard. In addition, both of these films’ themes are to struggle to achieve when films’ main characters face with some difficulties. Helen struggles with her deafness and blindness while Frankie is trying to overcome his obstacles. Every two film includes some pathetic scenes which are affected to viewers. The most effective scene is Frankie’s brothers dying to their poverty, inasmuch as they are very sweet and innocent. Because of the fact that we need to take some advices, one of them is patience.
A lot of people run across some diffuculties in their life, but some of them are born with their miseries. Angela’s Ashes and Miracle Worker mention about hero and heroine’s hardness. Actually Miracle Worker’s heroine(Helen)has a rich family that easily supply her wishes. However, Angela’s Ashes’ hero(Frankie) has a poor family and also his father is drunkard. In addition, both of these films’ themes are to struggle to achieve when films’ main characters face with some difficulties. Helen struggles with her deafness and blindness while Frankie is trying to overcome his obstacles. Every two film includes some pathetic scenes which are affected to viewers. The most effective scene is Frankie’s brothers dying to their poverty, inasmuch as they are very sweet and innocent. Because of the fact that we need to take some advices, one of them is patience.
21 Mayıs 2010 Cuma
cause and effect essay
Stress affects all of us in many ways. Causes of stress are flexible furthermore we may not know why we are angry and things which we worry. Causes of stress can be very different for every country. Some countries'people worry about life anxiety and some of them strugle against unemployment. Our country has some reasons but the big problem is unemployment. Another diffuculties are small and these diffuculties grow out of unemployment.
First of all, family is the best important item in the community so I want to start parental stress. This kind of stress includes a lot of causes, some of them emanates from father attitudes towards to family and the others result from unemployment. These problems result in parental stress and moreover divorcethe spouse.
Second of all, school is the reason which cause the stress. Students have a lot of problems,especially laxy students. Their lessons, their exams and their teacher' attitudes very affect the students. sometimes they have problems with their friends,close friends.
First of all, family is the best important item in the community so I want to start parental stress. This kind of stress includes a lot of causes, some of them emanates from father attitudes towards to family and the others result from unemployment. These problems result in parental stress and moreover divorcethe spouse.
Second of all, school is the reason which cause the stress. Students have a lot of problems,especially laxy students. Their lessons, their exams and their teacher' attitudes very affect the students. sometimes they have problems with their friends,close friends.
20 Mayıs 2010 Perşembe
process essay
NATURE OF MACHINE
After Industrial Revolution it decreases need for human power. A lot of different machines have been built by producers in order to accelerate the production rate. These machines are built to different raw materials. Their usage is different to some extent from each other. While some of them are used for agricultural purposes the others are used to build buildings. It is not easy to construct a machine.
First of all, to construct a machine, we need to make a plan related to things which will be done. Plan includes to machines, list of tools which will be used and process of structure. Even if , we don’t see machine, we have an idea about machine thanks to machine’s plan. We should make a plan in order to see what to do for later processes.
Combining to pieces is next process to constitute to machine. This stage can be different for every machine. Pieces combine by force of welding and adding. Before this part, pieces should coordinate as suitable for plan. If it needs to paint, it can paint different colours. Some times machine pieces are tied up with spacers.
At the last process we can do to final controls. We decide what to the lack of machine while we may do some exercises. Maybe we can try to repair these defiance’s.
End of all, machine is ready for doing something. We should use according to usage descriptions, to use more this machine. Furthermore, we should not work so much also. In order to work machine we can need human power, however, machine decreases need for human power.
After Industrial Revolution it decreases need for human power. A lot of different machines have been built by producers in order to accelerate the production rate. These machines are built to different raw materials. Their usage is different to some extent from each other. While some of them are used for agricultural purposes the others are used to build buildings. It is not easy to construct a machine.
First of all, to construct a machine, we need to make a plan related to things which will be done. Plan includes to machines, list of tools which will be used and process of structure. Even if , we don’t see machine, we have an idea about machine thanks to machine’s plan. We should make a plan in order to see what to do for later processes.
Combining to pieces is next process to constitute to machine. This stage can be different for every machine. Pieces combine by force of welding and adding. Before this part, pieces should coordinate as suitable for plan. If it needs to paint, it can paint different colours. Some times machine pieces are tied up with spacers.
At the last process we can do to final controls. We decide what to the lack of machine while we may do some exercises. Maybe we can try to repair these defiance’s.
End of all, machine is ready for doing something. We should use according to usage descriptions, to use more this machine. Furthermore, we should not work so much also. In order to work machine we can need human power, however, machine decreases need for human power.
9 Mayıs 2010 Pazar
classification essay
BIRDS TRY TO STAY IN LIFE
We can see everywhere birds singing, flying, talking to each other. Unfortunately, day by day, kinds of birds are decreasing, furthermore, they face extinction. Early ages, were able to classify specious of birds, easily, but nowadays classifying can be difficult because of extinction of birds. We can classify birds only some certain features related to birds.
Some kids of birds continue to live edge of the river, lake and sea shore. Sometimes they drink water in these places, innocently. They are full of beans after fresh up and they sing songs. These birds live fresh water or salt water. Generally, birds opt for watery areas where these places have fish of dense population. Some birds (in this kind) are herbivorous and nourish from green roaches which places edge of river. They build their nests on the islets. Their growing seasons change as depend on season’s conditions. Always, they migrate with their herds in some seasons. People never think and ignore their awesome life. They just think about dying to birds.
Some kinds of birds try to surviving above the cliff and some areas. Due to the harsh climatic conditions; they have both powerful wings and strong legs. They build their nests on the trees and on the unreachable places. Some birds (in this kind) usually are carnivores. Some of them have sharp look like eagles. They have a lot of different peculiarities. These birds like the other types of birds, these birds immigrate as herds, also. But they are unaware of cruel hunters.
End of all, their beauties are worth seeing and also their voices are worth hearting even if some people think total converse. Of course we can eat their meat and we can hunt to them but we must be careful times of their growing seasons. People listen to bird’s songs in order to peace of mind when they stay alone. So we should look our environment, especially birds which are invisible anymore.
We can see everywhere birds singing, flying, talking to each other. Unfortunately, day by day, kinds of birds are decreasing, furthermore, they face extinction. Early ages, were able to classify specious of birds, easily, but nowadays classifying can be difficult because of extinction of birds. We can classify birds only some certain features related to birds.
Some kids of birds continue to live edge of the river, lake and sea shore. Sometimes they drink water in these places, innocently. They are full of beans after fresh up and they sing songs. These birds live fresh water or salt water. Generally, birds opt for watery areas where these places have fish of dense population. Some birds (in this kind) are herbivorous and nourish from green roaches which places edge of river. They build their nests on the islets. Their growing seasons change as depend on season’s conditions. Always, they migrate with their herds in some seasons. People never think and ignore their awesome life. They just think about dying to birds.
Some kinds of birds try to surviving above the cliff and some areas. Due to the harsh climatic conditions; they have both powerful wings and strong legs. They build their nests on the trees and on the unreachable places. Some birds (in this kind) usually are carnivores. Some of them have sharp look like eagles. They have a lot of different peculiarities. These birds like the other types of birds, these birds immigrate as herds, also. But they are unaware of cruel hunters.
End of all, their beauties are worth seeing and also their voices are worth hearting even if some people think total converse. Of course we can eat their meat and we can hunt to them but we must be careful times of their growing seasons. People listen to bird’s songs in order to peace of mind when they stay alone. So we should look our environment, especially birds which are invisible anymore.
I hope the last one
A Different World
You are astounded when you see so many cows. It isn’t diffucult to understand here is a cow farm. I tought much more beautifulwhile I was walking around the shed. Here it was very enjoyable for me, that day.
I always remember that day whenever Isee a cow. I saw so many cows at every age in there. Some cows were small and mischievous. At the same time some cows were big and also peaceful. All of them were independent from each other except for cows which had a family. Some cows were lying under the big trees and they ruminated as if they had gum in their mouths. There were a lot of sweet calves and they were running after their mothers. In addition, grenness was very suitable for these animals both eating and sleeping. Cows were nourished very well by farmers even if sometimes this work is very tiring for them. Farm affairs were being this in throughthout day and soon all of cows entered the big shed in rows in the evenings.
This farm was very beautiful. I was both very enjoyed and very pleased to see this farm and also I learned some things about cows.
You are astounded when you see so many cows. It isn’t diffucult to understand here is a cow farm. I tought much more beautifulwhile I was walking around the shed. Here it was very enjoyable for me, that day.
I always remember that day whenever Isee a cow. I saw so many cows at every age in there. Some cows were small and mischievous. At the same time some cows were big and also peaceful. All of them were independent from each other except for cows which had a family. Some cows were lying under the big trees and they ruminated as if they had gum in their mouths. There were a lot of sweet calves and they were running after their mothers. In addition, grenness was very suitable for these animals both eating and sleeping. Cows were nourished very well by farmers even if sometimes this work is very tiring for them. Farm affairs were being this in throughthout day and soon all of cows entered the big shed in rows in the evenings.
This farm was very beautiful. I was both very enjoyed and very pleased to see this farm and also I learned some things about cows.
25 Nisan 2010 Pazar
argumentative essay
WRONG GREEN LIGHT
Drivers and pedestrians often use for short-cuts to reach their destination quicker. To reach quicker, they sometimes tempt to violate to traffic rules. One of the most frequent ways of violating to traffic rules is breaking to traffic lights. This may result in a good end. However, this is illegal in terms of social statement and economic damages.
First of all, violating traffic lights is socially unacceptable. Drivers and walkers expect that they arrive at their destination swifter. If a driver breaks the rules, this fault finalize wounding or dying of a person who may be himself or herself. I remember once when a driver had an accident and crashed into an old woman. Driver, who hit a defenseless woman, had violated the red light. It was an embarrassment for everyone- the driver, the pedestrian- to be true to life.
Breaking the rules is also wrong because it has a lot of economic damages. Some people think their cars although the life of someone who is run down by them is more important than their economic problems after the accident. One of the my friends told that she saw an accident on the motorway and in that accident, young man crashed into a car due to not stopping to red light. Soon he called a repairman before he called the ambulance. The important thing in that situation is that someone pays attention to themselves and the others.
It is true that many people work some jobs and have to reach their jobs in time. Drivers and also pedestrians don’t be careful traffic and traffic rules in such times. They may argue that traffic lights take so much times. Moreover, they sometimes have no choice aside from passing red light. Nevertheless, passing the red light should never be solution. Instead of it, drivers and pedestrians might try to wait the road line. Otherwise, if they break the traffic rules, they won’t save their future life. As a result they may not be good driver and pedestrian on the roads. In the end, violating the traffic rules is very harmful to both drivers and pedestrians.
I think that traffic policemen must be more careful. Breaking of the traffic rules damages to drivers and pedestrians. If we don’t be careful, most of human life enters in danger.
Drivers and pedestrians often use for short-cuts to reach their destination quicker. To reach quicker, they sometimes tempt to violate to traffic rules. One of the most frequent ways of violating to traffic rules is breaking to traffic lights. This may result in a good end. However, this is illegal in terms of social statement and economic damages.
First of all, violating traffic lights is socially unacceptable. Drivers and walkers expect that they arrive at their destination swifter. If a driver breaks the rules, this fault finalize wounding or dying of a person who may be himself or herself. I remember once when a driver had an accident and crashed into an old woman. Driver, who hit a defenseless woman, had violated the red light. It was an embarrassment for everyone- the driver, the pedestrian- to be true to life.
Breaking the rules is also wrong because it has a lot of economic damages. Some people think their cars although the life of someone who is run down by them is more important than their economic problems after the accident. One of the my friends told that she saw an accident on the motorway and in that accident, young man crashed into a car due to not stopping to red light. Soon he called a repairman before he called the ambulance. The important thing in that situation is that someone pays attention to themselves and the others.
It is true that many people work some jobs and have to reach their jobs in time. Drivers and also pedestrians don’t be careful traffic and traffic rules in such times. They may argue that traffic lights take so much times. Moreover, they sometimes have no choice aside from passing red light. Nevertheless, passing the red light should never be solution. Instead of it, drivers and pedestrians might try to wait the road line. Otherwise, if they break the traffic rules, they won’t save their future life. As a result they may not be good driver and pedestrian on the roads. In the end, violating the traffic rules is very harmful to both drivers and pedestrians.
I think that traffic policemen must be more careful. Breaking of the traffic rules damages to drivers and pedestrians. If we don’t be careful, most of human life enters in danger.
descriptive essay( again and again:(
A Different World
You are astounded when you see so many cows. It isn’t diffucult to understand here is a cow farm. I tought much more beautifulwhile I was walking around the shed. Here it was very enjoyable for me, that day.
I always remember that day whenever Isee a cow. I saw so many cows at every age in there. Some cows were small and mischievous. At the same time some cows were big and also peaceful. All of them were independent from each other except for cows which had a family. Some cows were lying under the big trees and they ruminated as if they had gum in their mouths. There were a lot of sweet calves and they were running after their mothers. In addition, grenness was very suitable for these animals both eating and sleeping. Cows were nourished very well by farmers even if sometimes this work is very tiring for them. Farm affairs were being this in throughthout day and soon all of cows entered the big shed in rows in the evenings.
This farm was very beautiful. I was both very enjoyed and very pleased to see this farm and also I learned some things about cows.
You are astounded when you see so many cows. It isn’t diffucult to understand here is a cow farm. I tought much more beautifulwhile I was walking around the shed. Here it was very enjoyable for me, that day.
I always remember that day whenever Isee a cow. I saw so many cows at every age in there. Some cows were small and mischievous. At the same time some cows were big and also peaceful. All of them were independent from each other except for cows which had a family. Some cows were lying under the big trees and they ruminated as if they had gum in their mouths. There were a lot of sweet calves and they were running after their mothers. In addition, grenness was very suitable for these animals both eating and sleeping. Cows were nourished very well by farmers even if sometimes this work is very tiring for them. Farm affairs were being this in throughthout day and soon all of cows entered the big shed in rows in the evenings.
This farm was very beautiful. I was both very enjoyed and very pleased to see this farm and also I learned some things about cows.
1 Nisan 2010 Perşembe
desciriptive essay after feedback
A Different World
You are astounded when you see so many cows. You need to know this ;here is a cow farm. I started to understand that I thought much more beautiful while Iwas walking around. Here was very enjoyeble for mei, that day.
I always remember that day when I
see a cow. I saw so many cows in there. There was a lot of big, bigger, biggest small smaller smallest cowsin there. All of them were independent from each other except for cows which had family. Greennes places were very suitable for these animals. Cows were nourished very good by farmers.There were a lot of sweet calves and was running their mothers’ behind. Some cows was lying under the big trees and they ruminated as if they had gum in their mouths. Farm affairs was being this in throughout day and soon all of cows entered big shed in rows in evenings.
This farm was very beautiful. I was both very enjoyed and very pleased to see this farm, and also I learned a lort of things about cows.
You are astounded when you see so many cows. You need to know this ;here is a cow farm. I started to understand that I thought much more beautiful while Iwas walking around. Here was very enjoyeble for mei, that day.
I always remember that day when I
see a cow. I saw so many cows in there. There was a lot of big, bigger, biggest small smaller smallest cowsin there. All of them were independent from each other except for cows which had family. Greennes places were very suitable for these animals. Cows were nourished very good by farmers.There were a lot of sweet calves and was running their mothers’ behind. Some cows was lying under the big trees and they ruminated as if they had gum in their mouths. Farm affairs was being this in throughout day and soon all of cows entered big shed in rows in evenings.
This farm was very beautiful. I was both very enjoyed and very pleased to see this farm, and also I learned a lort of things about cows.
a example of descriptive essay
Brad Ferguson
Composition/Rhetoric
September 26, 1999
The Football Experience
In the beginning, there was football. The official said, Let the stadium lights come on, and they came on. The football players came onto the field, and they saw the light was good. Other teams started to show up and practice on the battle ground, otherwise known as the "playing field." Fans shouted, and cheerleaders went on about their playful acts. Parents, brothers, sisters, and close friends all piled into the stands to see the game of the year. The official stepped out onto the moist grass at Williams Stadium in Plano, Texas. The time was seven o'clock p.m. on a Thursday night. He paused for a moment, looked at his stopwatch, and blew his whistle. Gigantic muscular men came from out of nowhere as the fans began to cheer, waving various flags, and clanging cow bells. The bells sounded like a wind chime in an April shower, all different sounds at different times.
The players ran out to the middle of the stadium. A smell of hatred and resentment came about in the air. The crowd came unglued from their seats. The sounds of various noisemakers filled the air once again. Parents and grandparents alike came to their feet in the stands. Cars stopped on the street in front of the stadium, as they honked their horns, and cheered for their team of choice. As the two burly men stood in the middle of the field, many thoughts ran through their heads. They both knew someone was going to die, but defeat was out of the question. The official tossed a polished silver quarter into the air. The coin hit the wet grass with a shiny face of George Washington clearly showing. The home team will receive the ball. Both anger infested players shook hands and ran back to their sideline. The fans began to cheer as the players took the field again. Little did the fans know of how the players practiced all week long.
The Clark Cougars had a very intense practice, while the Williams Warriors slacked off, and took an easy week, since their opponent was not that good of a team. The kick-off approached for both teams, almost instantaneously. Memories of past football games, and practices were rushing through our heads. The time clock read fifteen minutes even; time outs were at three a piece, and it was the first quarter. Suddenly, a whistle blew, and brown bundle of pigskin went flying into the air. Running to the ball, one of the Clark Cougars quickly caught the football, stepped left, then to the right, covering positive yardage. Soon after, the ball carrier was brought down by a pack of Warriors, and the ball was first down for the Cougars.
I had been waiting for this moment all of my life. The match up of the century was about to begin. The Clark Cougars have lost 14 years straight to the Warriors. Coaches only daydreamed of beating the undefeated Warriors. As the quarterback called the play, I smiled with joy. The first play of the game was to me. I played running back for the team, so I was going to run the ball. First play, up the middle of the field, I ran for a fifteen yard gain. The next play was to one of my fellow team mates, which he also ran for another large gain of 26 yards. I could not believe my eyes. After all these years, the game was finally here. We, as a team, were slowly tearing apart the Warrior's defense.
Our offense was dominating the ball, and they could not score against our defense. Shortly after the first quarter, the Cougars took the lead going into the second quarter, fourteen to zero. The start of the second quarter came as a shock to our team. We were starting to get tired, and make little mistakes that cost us a touchdown. One of the cornerbacks was not on the right coverage, and that lead to six points, followed by an extra point after the touchdown. Our team fumbled again on offense, and turned the ball back over to the Warriors, resulting in another Warrior touchdown. We all hung our heads as the Warriors celebrated their score, and taunted our players. As we approached our sideline, the coach had a few words of his own to share with the team. "Listen up here boys, it ain't over yet. If you give up now, you are going to loose. That is the sport of football. If you give up, you lose." I was not going to let 5 years of previous football experience go to waste, just because I was tired. We as a team knew our coach was serious, as a tiny tear drop formed in the corner of his eye.
Half time came about, as we all headed to the locker room for a sip of cool water, and a long speech made by the coaches. To my surprise, the coach was very calm with us as he drew out plays with piece of white chalk on the board. The coach mainly concentrated on the linemen, and the quarterbacks. As I sat there in the locker room, I knew what I had to do. I knew that the team was depending on my skills. Visions of victory ran through my head. I visualized the opponent as a measly bowling pin, and myself as the bowling ball. My imagination started to run wild. As I felt the adrenaline running through my veins, my body started to tremble with anger. I thought to myself, "They really do think we can't win, and I have to prove them wrong."
The next quarter, our team took the field. With anger and rage in my eyes, I was ready. I was a true lean, mean, killing machine. Nothing was going to get in my way. My head steamed a white smoke. The weather slowly began to get colder a cold front moved in. The sky, covered with clouds, grumbled at us as we called our plays, and ran them. As the end of the third quarter approached us, both teams were overcome with fatigue. The score remained at fourteen to fourteen.
The weather began to get cold, and small droplets of water started to fall from the ocean like sky. I felt the nervousness of the crowd, as the clanging of the cow bells came to a halt. Coaches paced back and fourth, as we headed into the fourth quarter. Each team got two possessions on offense. Neither team had the strength to penetrate the defense. Three minutes remained on the time clock. The weather took over the game, pouring down with rain from the black sky. It was first down and ten for the Clark Cougars. The play was called in the huddle, and the players sprinted up to the line. The play consisted of me running to the right, and the quarter back was going to toss the ball to me. "Down, set, hut, hut, hike!" As I took off to the right side of the field, I suddenly felt a burst of energy. My bones felt relaxed, and my muscles replenished. The quarterback tossed me the ball, as I ran frantically to the outside of the playing field. I couldn't believe my eyes, as I viewed the hole made for me to run through. Fifteen yards down the field, I met up with one of my old friends. The cornerback slipped and fell onto the turf in his attempt to tackle me. As I darted up the sideline to the endzone, I smiled with joy. The crowd went wild. Popcorn spilled onto the wet ground. Cow bells once again sounded as the raindrops still poured down. I will never forget that moment of my life. The smile on my face was literally being pulled up by strings that wouldn't seem to let go.
Our kicker went on to kick the extra point, as only one minute remained on the time clock. The Clark Cougars went on to beat the Williams Warriors. I could see it now on the front page of the town news paper. "Clark demolishes Williams for the first time in 14 years!" We finally beat the best team in the world! As we celebrated, and jumped around on the soggy grass, a tear came to my eye. It was all hitting me now. I finally achieved the goal of my life! I could not control the tremendous smirk on my face. As I watched the coach from the opposing team cry in agony, I thought to myself, "That must be what they call the agony of defeat." I knew that the moment of my life I had long waited for, was gone. Only memories are left in my mind, and I cherish every single one of them.
Composition/Rhetoric
September 26, 1999
The Football Experience
In the beginning, there was football. The official said, Let the stadium lights come on, and they came on. The football players came onto the field, and they saw the light was good. Other teams started to show up and practice on the battle ground, otherwise known as the "playing field." Fans shouted, and cheerleaders went on about their playful acts. Parents, brothers, sisters, and close friends all piled into the stands to see the game of the year. The official stepped out onto the moist grass at Williams Stadium in Plano, Texas. The time was seven o'clock p.m. on a Thursday night. He paused for a moment, looked at his stopwatch, and blew his whistle. Gigantic muscular men came from out of nowhere as the fans began to cheer, waving various flags, and clanging cow bells. The bells sounded like a wind chime in an April shower, all different sounds at different times.
The players ran out to the middle of the stadium. A smell of hatred and resentment came about in the air. The crowd came unglued from their seats. The sounds of various noisemakers filled the air once again. Parents and grandparents alike came to their feet in the stands. Cars stopped on the street in front of the stadium, as they honked their horns, and cheered for their team of choice. As the two burly men stood in the middle of the field, many thoughts ran through their heads. They both knew someone was going to die, but defeat was out of the question. The official tossed a polished silver quarter into the air. The coin hit the wet grass with a shiny face of George Washington clearly showing. The home team will receive the ball. Both anger infested players shook hands and ran back to their sideline. The fans began to cheer as the players took the field again. Little did the fans know of how the players practiced all week long.
The Clark Cougars had a very intense practice, while the Williams Warriors slacked off, and took an easy week, since their opponent was not that good of a team. The kick-off approached for both teams, almost instantaneously. Memories of past football games, and practices were rushing through our heads. The time clock read fifteen minutes even; time outs were at three a piece, and it was the first quarter. Suddenly, a whistle blew, and brown bundle of pigskin went flying into the air. Running to the ball, one of the Clark Cougars quickly caught the football, stepped left, then to the right, covering positive yardage. Soon after, the ball carrier was brought down by a pack of Warriors, and the ball was first down for the Cougars.
I had been waiting for this moment all of my life. The match up of the century was about to begin. The Clark Cougars have lost 14 years straight to the Warriors. Coaches only daydreamed of beating the undefeated Warriors. As the quarterback called the play, I smiled with joy. The first play of the game was to me. I played running back for the team, so I was going to run the ball. First play, up the middle of the field, I ran for a fifteen yard gain. The next play was to one of my fellow team mates, which he also ran for another large gain of 26 yards. I could not believe my eyes. After all these years, the game was finally here. We, as a team, were slowly tearing apart the Warrior's defense.
Our offense was dominating the ball, and they could not score against our defense. Shortly after the first quarter, the Cougars took the lead going into the second quarter, fourteen to zero. The start of the second quarter came as a shock to our team. We were starting to get tired, and make little mistakes that cost us a touchdown. One of the cornerbacks was not on the right coverage, and that lead to six points, followed by an extra point after the touchdown. Our team fumbled again on offense, and turned the ball back over to the Warriors, resulting in another Warrior touchdown. We all hung our heads as the Warriors celebrated their score, and taunted our players. As we approached our sideline, the coach had a few words of his own to share with the team. "Listen up here boys, it ain't over yet. If you give up now, you are going to loose. That is the sport of football. If you give up, you lose." I was not going to let 5 years of previous football experience go to waste, just because I was tired. We as a team knew our coach was serious, as a tiny tear drop formed in the corner of his eye.
Half time came about, as we all headed to the locker room for a sip of cool water, and a long speech made by the coaches. To my surprise, the coach was very calm with us as he drew out plays with piece of white chalk on the board. The coach mainly concentrated on the linemen, and the quarterbacks. As I sat there in the locker room, I knew what I had to do. I knew that the team was depending on my skills. Visions of victory ran through my head. I visualized the opponent as a measly bowling pin, and myself as the bowling ball. My imagination started to run wild. As I felt the adrenaline running through my veins, my body started to tremble with anger. I thought to myself, "They really do think we can't win, and I have to prove them wrong."
The next quarter, our team took the field. With anger and rage in my eyes, I was ready. I was a true lean, mean, killing machine. Nothing was going to get in my way. My head steamed a white smoke. The weather slowly began to get colder a cold front moved in. The sky, covered with clouds, grumbled at us as we called our plays, and ran them. As the end of the third quarter approached us, both teams were overcome with fatigue. The score remained at fourteen to fourteen.
The weather began to get cold, and small droplets of water started to fall from the ocean like sky. I felt the nervousness of the crowd, as the clanging of the cow bells came to a halt. Coaches paced back and fourth, as we headed into the fourth quarter. Each team got two possessions on offense. Neither team had the strength to penetrate the defense. Three minutes remained on the time clock. The weather took over the game, pouring down with rain from the black sky. It was first down and ten for the Clark Cougars. The play was called in the huddle, and the players sprinted up to the line. The play consisted of me running to the right, and the quarter back was going to toss the ball to me. "Down, set, hut, hut, hike!" As I took off to the right side of the field, I suddenly felt a burst of energy. My bones felt relaxed, and my muscles replenished. The quarterback tossed me the ball, as I ran frantically to the outside of the playing field. I couldn't believe my eyes, as I viewed the hole made for me to run through. Fifteen yards down the field, I met up with one of my old friends. The cornerback slipped and fell onto the turf in his attempt to tackle me. As I darted up the sideline to the endzone, I smiled with joy. The crowd went wild. Popcorn spilled onto the wet ground. Cow bells once again sounded as the raindrops still poured down. I will never forget that moment of my life. The smile on my face was literally being pulled up by strings that wouldn't seem to let go.
Our kicker went on to kick the extra point, as only one minute remained on the time clock. The Clark Cougars went on to beat the Williams Warriors. I could see it now on the front page of the town news paper. "Clark demolishes Williams for the first time in 14 years!" We finally beat the best team in the world! As we celebrated, and jumped around on the soggy grass, a tear came to my eye. It was all hitting me now. I finally achieved the goal of my life! I could not control the tremendous smirk on my face. As I watched the coach from the opposing team cry in agony, I thought to myself, "That must be what they call the agony of defeat." I knew that the moment of my life I had long waited for, was gone. Only memories are left in my mind, and I cherish every single one of them.
18 Mart 2010 Perşembe
cause and effect essay
Why Juvenile Commit to Suicide?
Why students commit to suicide? I started to think this when I heard about the suicide affairs among young people. I am worring about him/her and their families,friends. Their families’ expectations demolish, suddenly and also themself. May be alot of factors that they do it, and they have one effective reason,too.
One of the reasons, these persons feel alone in their environment. Their friends don’t help them and their family don’t their problems. Their fathers come from their job, tiredly and soon they lie on the sofa. Their mothers don’t go out kitchen. These times person come in home. Everybody who is in home, doesn’t ignore them. To some students, their parents can listen to their problems but they can evaluate to age’s conditions. Actually, these person are usually unhappy both their school and their environment. They find the solutionin the death.(commit to suicide). Parents had better in their children this makes them feel better.
Another reason is failure.( actually these two reasons are related to with each other. If children(especially teenagers) are failure in their school, they are afraid of their families’ pressure. They can’t tell their problems related to school or lessons to their parents and their teachers. If they say their dificulties to their instructers, they give an information about their situation to families. Soon problems or dificulties increase day by day and teenager fed up with these and want to die.
Families should follow to their daughters and sons in every situations.
Both of two reasons are affective for commit to suicide. Nowadays, there are a lot of suicide affairs. Both family and person(children or teenager) should be careful about life problems. Anything isn’t important as your life!
Why students commit to suicide? I started to think this when I heard about the suicide affairs among young people. I am worring about him/her and their families,friends. Their families’ expectations demolish, suddenly and also themself. May be alot of factors that they do it, and they have one effective reason,too.
One of the reasons, these persons feel alone in their environment. Their friends don’t help them and their family don’t their problems. Their fathers come from their job, tiredly and soon they lie on the sofa. Their mothers don’t go out kitchen. These times person come in home. Everybody who is in home, doesn’t ignore them. To some students, their parents can listen to their problems but they can evaluate to age’s conditions. Actually, these person are usually unhappy both their school and their environment. They find the solutionin the death.(commit to suicide). Parents had better in their children this makes them feel better.
Another reason is failure.( actually these two reasons are related to with each other. If children(especially teenagers) are failure in their school, they are afraid of their families’ pressure. They can’t tell their problems related to school or lessons to their parents and their teachers. If they say their dificulties to their instructers, they give an information about their situation to families. Soon problems or dificulties increase day by day and teenager fed up with these and want to die.
Families should follow to their daughters and sons in every situations.
Both of two reasons are affective for commit to suicide. Nowadays, there are a lot of suicide affairs. Both family and person(children or teenager) should be careful about life problems. Anything isn’t important as your life!
5 Mart 2010 Cuma
MY MIGRATION PLACES
I stayed a lot of places until this year. Those places were my hometown, temporarily. One of them is Demirci, the other is Gördes. They look like one another in many ways, when I compare to them even though they have some differences. Even if I didn’t recognize them,properly, but I very like as my real hometown due to my souvenirs.
There are many differences and also similarities. Being differences isn’t obstacle to to like these cities. Firstly, Demirci bigger than Gördes, and also Demirci is more crowded than Gördes because of big university. Furhermore, Demirci is colder than Gördes. Demirci has a lot of diffuculties, especially in winter. In addition to these, Gördes is more beautiful than Demirci because of tropical atmosphare and with cleanest streets. These are difference affairs which are known.
In spite of their differences, both cities’ people are indulgent and friendly. For example, they put everything your front, when you go there. Each has the same accent owing to being near one another. Neither Demirci nor Gördes is far my hometown. You can reach to these places from my hometown, easily.
In conclusion, I love these cities. Both of them are hometown and migration places. Demirci is cold, Gördes is hot, so Demirci cools me, Gördes warms me. These cities keep me balanced.
I stayed a lot of places until this year. Those places were my hometown, temporarily. One of them is Demirci, the other is Gördes. They look like one another in many ways, when I compare to them even though they have some differences. Even if I didn’t recognize them,properly, but I very like as my real hometown due to my souvenirs.
There are many differences and also similarities. Being differences isn’t obstacle to to like these cities. Firstly, Demirci bigger than Gördes, and also Demirci is more crowded than Gördes because of big university. Furhermore, Demirci is colder than Gördes. Demirci has a lot of diffuculties, especially in winter. In addition to these, Gördes is more beautiful than Demirci because of tropical atmosphare and with cleanest streets. These are difference affairs which are known.
In spite of their differences, both cities’ people are indulgent and friendly. For example, they put everything your front, when you go there. Each has the same accent owing to being near one another. Neither Demirci nor Gördes is far my hometown. You can reach to these places from my hometown, easily.
In conclusion, I love these cities. Both of them are hometown and migration places. Demirci is cold, Gördes is hot, so Demirci cools me, Gördes warms me. These cities keep me balanced.
4 Mart 2010 Perşembe
Interesting Marriage
I was very affected when I heart that my friend would marry a foreigner. I didn't know what I would say her. I thought a lot of mixxed things. How would they pass their marriage times? how would they agree with another? Icouldn't guess their future times, but this marriage may afffect positively her.
My friend's life absolutely changed, when she married Jarol. Her clothes, language, and using words changed. Everybody, with the inclusion of me, thouguht that would have some adaptation problems, because different cultures seperate from one another due to their different pecularities. Especially the most important problem is language problem. In spite of these, this marriage had some possitive situations such as language improving. Lanuage may be a problem, but may be a innovation.
Conclusively, this interesting marriage affects them, but they will decide whether this marriage is worth living or not.We are waiting curiously what will happen.
My friend's life absolutely changed, when she married Jarol. Her clothes, language, and using words changed. Everybody, with the inclusion of me, thouguht that would have some adaptation problems, because different cultures seperate from one another due to their different pecularities. Especially the most important problem is language problem. In spite of these, this marriage had some possitive situations such as language improving. Lanuage may be a problem, but may be a innovation.
Conclusively, this interesting marriage affects them, but they will decide whether this marriage is worth living or not.We are waiting curiously what will happen.
2 Mart 2010 Salı
A Different World
You are astounded when you see so many cows. You need know this;here is cow farm. I was very surprised when I saw this large farm. I started to understand that I thought much more beautiful, while Iwas walking around. Here was very enjoyable for me, that day.
I always remember that day when I see a cow. I saw uncountable cows in there. There were a lot of big, biggest, small, smallest cows in farm. All of them were independent each other except for cows which had family. Greennes places were very suitable these animals. Cows were nourished very goodly every day by farmers. There were a lot of sweet calves and they ran their mothers’ behind. Some cows lied under the big trees and they ruminated as if they had gum their mouthes. Farm was passing this throughout day and evenigs all of cows entered in the big shed in rows.
Here was beautiful like heaven. Both I was very enjoyed and I was very pleased to see this farm, and also I learned a lot of things about cows.
You are astounded when you see so many cows. You need know this;here is cow farm. I was very surprised when I saw this large farm. I started to understand that I thought much more beautiful, while Iwas walking around. Here was very enjoyable for me, that day.
I always remember that day when I see a cow. I saw uncountable cows in there. There were a lot of big, biggest, small, smallest cows in farm. All of them were independent each other except for cows which had family. Greennes places were very suitable these animals. Cows were nourished very goodly every day by farmers. There were a lot of sweet calves and they ran their mothers’ behind. Some cows lied under the big trees and they ruminated as if they had gum their mouthes. Farm was passing this throughout day and evenigs all of cows entered in the big shed in rows.
Here was beautiful like heaven. Both I was very enjoyed and I was very pleased to see this farm, and also I learned a lot of things about cows.
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